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    Hostboard Member helloimmred's Avatar
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    Well, we're at it again.
    I'm currently writing a league story with a fight between me and my ex, similiar to "my ex lets me box her."
    I'm taking my time with it because I want it to be very good.
    If you have any plausible suggestions, I'd be happy to try and incorperate them into the story. I'm about 1/3 of the way through.
    Cheers

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    Hello Dirk,

    eager to read that story!

    My suggestions:

    - keep up your usual level of violence and involve some heavy punishment to Eve's (that was her name, yes?) breasts and pussy.

    - I guess you'll win that fight but Eve will beat you up pretty much. She's definitely furious you split up with such a nice and beautiful woman like her.

    - how about involving your current girlfriend (or a woman that wants to be your next girlfriend). At some moment where Eve is beating you up pretty baldy, either Eve sees that woman or that woman tries to help you and attacks Eve. The dutch girl beats her up badly and returns her to the raunchy crowd, but that distraction gives you the chance to recover and return to the fight.

    - To humiliate her in the end and to show her she lost control, you'd give her one last fuck before, during or after finishing her and the fight.

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